Main Plot Arc

Four brothers, exhibiting various trinalities <sp?>, discover, explore, and aid a fantastic world filled with fantastic people.

Anatomy of Story approach

The Anatomy of Story book directs that every good story should start with a premise and a design principle.

Premise: The youngest of three brothers kills a dragon.

Design principle: Mild metaphor and surprising alien setting.

He also says that the best, most interesting character is the hero. I think this is, as we have previously determined, Oswald. The other brothers all have a rather static "deal" or "style" that they stick to. Ziggy is creative and organized. Hugh hunts evil. Zack is a "cool dude" who commands the undead. But Oswald, he's a little of everything, and doesn't really know who he is at the beginning.

Hero: Oswald

The Prophecy

The info here is in a state of flux, everything can be changed!

The prophecy

Is it actually necessary?
Does it need to be misinterpereted?
Can we convey this information in some other way?
What other prophecies have been made in the past, and how did they turn out?

Here are some ideas of how the prophecy can be specific, but still open to mis-interpretation. We may consider making it very explicit instead, to draw out the silliness of the mis-interpretation.

Ziggy, "gather knowlege from the world(tree)" He needs to gather the knowlege from the Great Tree, but he thinks it means all of the nations.
Hugh, "Give your sword to your brother" He should give it to Oswald, but he thinks it means "pledge fealty to my brothers in arms" or a fellow hero, or a king of some kind.
Zack, "You must become strong so you can help your brothers" means that he must pour his strength into the sword, but thinks that it means help your "fellow soldiers" and creates an army of golems to aid in the battle.
Oswald. "You must kill the rot at the core of the world." Oswald must slay the dragon. He thinks that he must instead kill Zack. The continued attempts could be played for laughs?

Sets of contrasting points and symbols

The main plot arc involves four major groups

The Hozz Brothers are a group everyman. They spend most of their time working against their ultimate goals, through incompetence, misinformation, or laziness.
The Fayrie are a woman symbol society.
The Zarth are a male symbol society.
The Dragon is a symbol of competent evil. He is playing both sides of pretty much everything and keeps coming out on top.

The long-term history has three sections

The Dragon amasses treasure under the Great Tree, and gets most of the world to think that dragons don't exist, while the rest of the world is terrified of dragons, and tries to kill all the other ones.
The Oracle is established as accurate and reliable, and then prophesies that his offspring will fell/destroy the Great Tree. He is forced to flee as many decide to try and kill him and his family before this prophesy can come true.
The Hozz brothers fulfill the prophesy, but only after misinterpreting it and failing several times.

The main plot arc involves Three major locations

The House: The namesake of the comic. A house built by Durand. It provides a portal to Earth. Hiddin within the Garden of life
Great Tree, shifting off to the side of the world, home to the old guard of Fay and the Dragon's horde (The Lair).
Propitiation: A kingdom founded by eclectic mix of refugee Fey and zarth explorers. The land was given as a peace offering to the settlers by the tribal fey who live in the surrounding area in atonement for an accidental war. Propitiation is incidentally constructed atop the new Great Tree.

Note that all of thee locations are fairly near both to each-other, the surface, and the axis of Twinworld.

Fleshing out the characters

The Dragon

The Dragon wants treasure. Over the ages, he has accumulated a huge horde in the roots of the Great Tree. In order to enjoy his treasure in peace, he must make sure he is not discovered, and especially not hunted. To this end he kills all of the other dragons that he can find, and has convinced most of the world that dragons do not exist. He encourages a small (but corrupt) group of Fay to hunt any dragons that come up from the deeps, and has connections with the several dragon cults that spring up to worship dragons. The dragon cults seek out and protect any dragons that make it out of the depths, and then send them to the Dragon, presumably to "rule at his side". With these factions fighting each other, and neither aware of his location, he remains safe from the vast majority of creatures. He has heard of the last prophesy, but figures that even if the Great Tree falls, the roots will remain. He does not believe that humans exist.

The Oracle

The oracle wants people to believe the truth. Unfortunately, he isn't sure what that is most of the time. His predictions come un-bidden, and even he doesn't know what they portend. When he make predictions, many take them the wrong way, or re-interperet and twist them to mean what they want. After the Last Prophesy, most people think that the attention went to his head. Some claim that he was manipulating events to go the way he predicted. Others claim he is in fact the dragon, sowing seeds of delusion. Some still believe his veracity, but since he disappeared (to earth) the hopes that his last prophesy will come true are slim. He lives on earth, with his wife and children, and still makes prophecies occasionally. They always come true.

The Hozz brothers

The older three brothers are the Body (Zack) Soul (Hugh) and Spirit (Ziggy) of Man, or mankind. Oswald is the Christ figure, in that he is sent from the Father and lays down his life.

The older three are naif and quick to act. Shortly after arriving in Twin World, they each receive prophecies concerning how to do what is right. Each one of them chooses to read into and translate the words into what makes sense to them at the time. This happens throughout the story. The plain meaning is just too unbelievable! Through this convenient application of "interperetation", they end up on the wrong side of almost every conflict, and spend most of their time mucking things up. At the end, and almost by accident, they fulfill their roles, and the prophecy.

Fleshing out the World

The origin and history of the world, this may not be remembered the same by the Zarth and Fay.

several other locations

The Deepening, a city located at the lowest habitable region of the world. A major Zarth stronghold/citidel and center of dragon hunting operations.
Brimcloud: The capital of the Few, a major Fey kingdom. It has strong ties to old Great Tree and is the main opponent of its destruction.
Anglestruct: the capital of one of the major zarth empires. The center of all clockwork and mechanomancy.
Blazen: A small but famous Zarth outpost. Home to the greatest smith and foundery in the world.
The dragon cultist stronghold/temple: built at the root of the old Great Tree. The prison for Hugh.
Cloud 8: A small Zarth trading outpost. Home to outcasts, oppertunists, and calling port for the Woe.
Corral Keep: The nearest boarder citadel of Brimcloud to Propotiation. The center of their military efforts.

Key Plot Ideas

Reception of the Prophecy

The Hozz brothers receive their prophecies that were made by the Oracle. However, Oswald does not receive his prophecy

Oracle needs to have made individual prophecies for the brothers before leaving TwinWorld. Gives them to them, but has none for Oswald. Tells them that when all of their prophecies are united, they will be fulfilled. Three older brothers think that this means that Oswald isn't supposed to come, so they leave him behind. Oswald serves as the storyteller/narrator for the adventures in TwinWorld for the main beginning and middle of the story.

The great defeat

At the sub-climax, everyone fails. Hugh fails to defeat the dragon (tries by himself, wrong approach). Ziggy fails to save the Great Tree (tries at the wrong time, wrong Great Tree). Zack and Oswald fail to defeat the army of the "false center" (fighting on the wrong side, in the wrong battle). Hugh ends up imprisoned by the Dragon on the far side of the world, Ziggy is shamed in front of the elders of the Great Tree, and Zack and Oswald find themselves left for dead on the battle field.

The Turning Point

After their defeat, the Brothers begin to re-think his prophecies, especially in light of his "Last Prophecy". They start trying to fulfill the plain meaning of the prophecies they have recieved, but initially this results in catastrophy as they begin to undo their former work. The old Great Tree is felled when Hugh destroys his prison, and Ziggy grows the new Great Tree. In the process, much of Zarth is ruined (by the roots of the Old Great Tree tearing out, and the new roots sinking in). The dragon's is also exposed, so he decides to go to plan two, kill everything. Oswald must gain the trust of the Zarth and the New Centerieans in order to forge a dragon slaying weapon, but he mostly alienates their former allies. Zack finally embraces his Golem creating powers as a tool of good, but looses control of his army, causing widespread terror. Things are moving in the right direction, but looking worse than ever.

Hugh Kills Zack

But somehow Zack doesn't die all the way. Not sure how this one is going to work exactly. This is the culmination of Hugh hunting evil, and finding out that Zack is the cause of the zombie armies. There needs to be some development of the "necromancy is evil" theme before this point, as well as explanation of Zack's powers.

Dragon is Crafty

It would be cool if the dragon IS evil, but has a very different plan than the HOZZ brothers thought. For instance:

They think the dragon is trying to destroy the world tree, when he is actually trying very hard to save it.
They think the dragon is trying to kill them, when he doesn't even believe they exist.
They hear that the dragon wants an artifact and go racing off to get it before the dragon does. Turns out the dragon already has one just like it, and wanted another one for his collection, so spread the rumor to see if anyone could find more of them.
They find out that the dragon needs a certain artifact, so they go and destroy the only existing copy (angering lots of people in the process). The dragon was planning on making his own anyhow.

Critique

This whole page is a jumbled mess! Who writes this stuff?

Seriously though, I'm not sure what the story is about here. Hugh and Zack? Oswald and the Dragon? Ziggy? Twin World? Its inhabitants?

Yes. The plot is still a mess. I must stress the that unless we progress this is less than a guess. :) Ziggy 22:13, 28 January 2011 (UTC)