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− | [[ | + | [[Main_Plot_Arc| The overall story arc]] really needs to be expanded/solidified. |
[[The University]] needs some more details. Maybe some sketches. | [[The University]] needs some more details. Maybe some sketches. | ||
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[[Escape]] backstory could always be fleshed out more. This plays heavily into the character and history of [[Durand]] and [[Llieah]]. | [[Escape]] backstory could always be fleshed out more. This plays heavily into the character and history of [[Durand]] and [[Llieah]]. | ||
Use the information in [[:Category:HOZZ_brothers]] to flesh out the brothers themselves. | Use the information in [[:Category:HOZZ_brothers]] to flesh out the brothers themselves. | ||
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[[Cosmos]] has a few questions that need answers. | [[Cosmos]] has a few questions that need answers. | ||
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[[Llieah]] has a major backstory element added, also affects [[The House]] and [[Durand]]. Review, comment, and revise? | [[Llieah]] has a major backstory element added, also affects [[The House]] and [[Durand]]. Review, comment, and revise? | ||
− | [[Shaquell]], the [[dragon]] could use fleshing out. | + | [[Shaquell]], the [[dragon]] could use fleshing out. Also, he needs a much better name. |
Latest revision as of 07:33, 28 April 2010
The overall story arc really needs to be expanded/solidified.
The University needs some more details. Maybe some sketches.
Escape backstory could always be fleshed out more. This plays heavily into the character and history of Durand and Llieah.
Use the information in Category:HOZZ_brothers to flesh out the brothers themselves.
Cosmos has a few questions that need answers.
Llieah has a major backstory element added, also affects The House and Durand. Review, comment, and revise?
Shaquell, the dragon could use fleshing out. Also, he needs a much better name.