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==Instance Six== | ==Instance Six== | ||
| − | Panel 1: Zack gets pulled over | + | Panel 1: Zack gets pulled over, you can see the police car lights in the rear view window. |
| − | Panel 2: Zack uses the disgusted face on the cop | + | Panel 2: Zack uses the disgusted face on the cop, the cop is stone-faced, and wearing aviator glasses. |
| − | Panel 3: Zack is | + | Panel 3: Zack is staring at the ticket in his hands with a sad/quizzical look on his face. |
Panel 4: Zack uses the disgusted face at the ticket. | Panel 4: Zack uses the disgusted face at the ticket. | ||
| − | == | + | ==Instance Seven== |
| − | panel 1: | + | panel 1: Zack working in the dungeon with [[zombie]] next to him |
| − | panel 2: | + | panel 2: Zack looks at zombie and makes disgusted face |
| − | panel 3: | + | panel 3: He goes back to work, zombie makes disgusted face at Zack's work |
| − | panel 4: | + | panel 4: work bursts into flames, zack freaks out |
| + | *Alternate | ||
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| + | panel 1: Zack working in the dungeon with zombie next to him | ||
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| + | panel 2: Zack looks at zombie, zombie makes disgusted face at Zack | ||
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| + | panel 3: He goes back to work | ||
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| + | panel 4: Zack looks back at the zombie, is startled | ||
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| + | ==Breaking the fourth wall== | ||
| + | After we have run instance 4, we could [[break the fourth wall]]! | ||
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| + | =Response= | ||
| + | I think this would be an excellent series to start the comic with. Simple plot. Gag strips. No dialog. Short continuity. | ||
[[category:Silent Panels]][[category:Exaggerated Truth]] | [[category:Silent Panels]][[category:Exaggerated Truth]] | ||
Latest revision as of 01:14, 12 February 2011
In these silent comics we explore the possibilities of the disgusted face.
Contents
Instance One
Panel 1: Zack is walking down sidewalk. Two pretty girls are walking towards him. They are laughing.
Panel 2: Girls both look disgusted. Zack looks surprised. (May need to use diagonal half panels to show sudden change from laughing to disgusted)
Panel 3: Girls are walking past, their heads and eyes still on Zack, still disgusted. Zack is looking at himself.
Panel 4: Zack is confused and sad.
Instance Two
Panel 1: Hugh is reading. Zack runs up excitedly
Panel 2: Zack is pointing off panel. He uses his fingers to show walking.
Panel 3: Zack is making the disgusted face. He points to his face. Hugh looks surprised and intrigued.
Panel 4: Zack is pointing to himself excitedly. Hugh is grinning evilly.
Instance Three
Panel 1: Hugh and Zack are walking down the sidewalk laughing. And attractive girl is walking towards them.
Panel 2: Hugh and Zack both look disgusted at girl. Girl is confused.
Panel 3: Hugh and Zack continue past, still looking disgustedly at girl. Girl still confused and disturbed.
Panel 4: Girl stands alone, shocked.
Instance Four
Hugh practices disgusted face in mirror for two panels. Mirror cracks.
Instance Five
Hugh kills a small animal with disgusted face?
Instance Six
Panel 1: Zack gets pulled over, you can see the police car lights in the rear view window.
Panel 2: Zack uses the disgusted face on the cop, the cop is stone-faced, and wearing aviator glasses.
Panel 3: Zack is staring at the ticket in his hands with a sad/quizzical look on his face.
Panel 4: Zack uses the disgusted face at the ticket.
Instance Seven
panel 1: Zack working in the dungeon with zombie next to him
panel 2: Zack looks at zombie and makes disgusted face
panel 3: He goes back to work, zombie makes disgusted face at Zack's work
panel 4: work bursts into flames, zack freaks out
- Alternate
panel 1: Zack working in the dungeon with zombie next to him
panel 2: Zack looks at zombie, zombie makes disgusted face at Zack
panel 3: He goes back to work
panel 4: Zack looks back at the zombie, is startled
Breaking the fourth wall
After we have run instance 4, we could break the fourth wall!
Response
I think this would be an excellent series to start the comic with. Simple plot. Gag strips. No dialog. Short continuity.
