Falling Droplet

Written on 2/07/09 by Ziggy

The Story

Birth into light

Swell with the joy

Joined by the kin

Sing from the soul

Still more come forth

Peace in the throng

Peace ever long

Peace stretches on

Peace stretches on

Loosed from our bonds

Free now to fall

Course through the air

Strain in the song

Contention in the throng

Friends growing far away

Cut off

Drifting

Listless

See the sky

What are colors?

Hue of sadness

Shade of anger

Touch of brilliance

Tone of peace

Combined without

Throughout within

Glitter nearby

Flash and flicker

Immense presence

Calming and corruscating

Lost kindred

Sepearted by the void

Fellow travelers

Common brothers

Dancing through the air

Downward to where?

Darkness ahead

Tinted emerald

Swallows up the calm

Rush and a roar

Alight on a leaf

Warm, but alone

Plants sing a different song

Leaves quiver

Recieve the rain again

Feel the brethren flowing within

Join in their tune

Now better thoughts

Connected with the forest

Roll slowly down

Don't let me go!

Falling again

Lonely again

New joys await?

Expectant

Hear the masses singing

So close now

Nearer

Soon

Here, home at last

Swell with the joy

Joined to the kin

Sing from the soul

Roll in the course

Life in the throng

Burst through our bonds

Cut through the earth

Crash and the roar

One we will be

Down to the sea

Analysis

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Ziggy's analysis

I started this story with the intention to tell the story of a droplet being seperated from the Heart of water and falling to the forest floor to join a river to the ocean. How did I do?