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==Instance Six==
 
==Instance Six==
  
Panel 1: Zack gets pulled over
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Panel 1: Zack gets pulled over, you can see the police car lights in the rear view window.
  
Panel 2: Zack uses the disgusted face on the cop
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Panel 2: Zack uses the disgusted face on the cop, the cop is stone-faced, and wearing aviator glasses.
  
Panel 3: Zack is sitting in his car, staring at a ticket
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Panel 3: Zack is staring at the ticket in his hands with a sad/quizzical look on his face.
  
 
Panel 4: Zack uses the disgusted face at the ticket.
 
Panel 4: Zack uses the disgusted face at the ticket.
  
==Instnace Seven==
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==Instance Seven==
  
panel 1: zack working in the dungon
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panel 1: Zack working in the dungeon with [[zombie]] next to him
  
panel 2: zombi shambles up, zack looks at him questioningly
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panel 2: Zack looks at zombie and makes disgusted face
  
panel 3: zack uses disgusted face at zombi
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panel 3: He goes back to work, zombie makes disgusted face at Zack's work
  
panel 4: ...and here is were we could go a lot of places, not sure how to finish it. the zombie could laugh at him, explode, make the disgustded face back at him, or be totaly unaffected and zack would just be bummed--[[User:Zack|Zack]] 22:12, 13 August 2008 (UTC)
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panel 4: work bursts into flames, zack freaks out
  
==Instance Eight==
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*Alternate
Follow-up to instance Four:
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Panel 1: Zack and Hugh are walking off panel left, one making disgusted face, one laughing. Oswald is watching them
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panel 1: Zack working in the dungeon with zombie next to him
  
Panel 2: Oswald turns to the audience, makes the disgusted face
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panel 2: Zack looks at zombie, zombie makes disgusted face at Zack
  
Panel 3: The panel itself cracks
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panel 3: He goes back to work
  
Panel 4: Oswald walks off the panel right, which is hard to see, because the last panel is lying in a pile of fragments at the bottom of the page
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panel 4: Zack looks back at the zombie, is startled
  
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==Breaking the fourth wall==
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After we have run instance 4, we could [[break the fourth wall]]!
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=Response=
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I think this would be an excellent series to start the comic with. Simple plot. Gag strips. No dialog. Short continuity.
 
[[category:Silent Panels]][[category:Exaggerated Truth]]
 
[[category:Silent Panels]][[category:Exaggerated Truth]]

Latest revision as of 01:14, 12 February 2011

In these silent comics we explore the possibilities of the disgusted face.

Instance One

Panel 1: Zack is walking down sidewalk. Two pretty girls are walking towards him. They are laughing.

Panel 2: Girls both look disgusted. Zack looks surprised. (May need to use diagonal half panels to show sudden change from laughing to disgusted)

Panel 3: Girls are walking past, their heads and eyes still on Zack, still disgusted. Zack is looking at himself.

Panel 4: Zack is confused and sad.

Instance Two

Panel 1: Hugh is reading. Zack runs up excitedly

Panel 2: Zack is pointing off panel. He uses his fingers to show walking.

Panel 3: Zack is making the disgusted face. He points to his face. Hugh looks surprised and intrigued.

Panel 4: Zack is pointing to himself excitedly. Hugh is grinning evilly.

Instance Three

Panel 1: Hugh and Zack are walking down the sidewalk laughing. And attractive girl is walking towards them.

Panel 2: Hugh and Zack both look disgusted at girl. Girl is confused.

Panel 3: Hugh and Zack continue past, still looking disgustedly at girl. Girl still confused and disturbed.

Panel 4: Girl stands alone, shocked.

Instance Four

Hugh practices disgusted face in mirror for two panels. Mirror cracks.

Instance Five

Hugh kills a small animal with disgusted face?

Instance Six

Panel 1: Zack gets pulled over, you can see the police car lights in the rear view window.

Panel 2: Zack uses the disgusted face on the cop, the cop is stone-faced, and wearing aviator glasses.

Panel 3: Zack is staring at the ticket in his hands with a sad/quizzical look on his face.

Panel 4: Zack uses the disgusted face at the ticket.

Instance Seven

panel 1: Zack working in the dungeon with zombie next to him

panel 2: Zack looks at zombie and makes disgusted face

panel 3: He goes back to work, zombie makes disgusted face at Zack's work

panel 4: work bursts into flames, zack freaks out

  • Alternate

panel 1: Zack working in the dungeon with zombie next to him

panel 2: Zack looks at zombie, zombie makes disgusted face at Zack

panel 3: He goes back to work

panel 4: Zack looks back at the zombie, is startled

Breaking the fourth wall

After we have run instance 4, we could break the fourth wall!

Response

I think this would be an excellent series to start the comic with. Simple plot. Gag strips. No dialog. Short continuity.