Difference between revisions of "Critiques"

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*So surreal one couldn't connect
 
*So surreal one couldn't connect
 
*screaming bad guys
 
*screaming bad guys
*human failure
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*consistent repetitive omnipresent human failure
 
*plot holes
 
*plot holes
  
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Bad stuff
 
Bad stuff
 
*seemed to drop metaphors and themes in mid stride
 
*seemed to drop metaphors and themes in mid stride
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==Emporers New Groove==
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Good stuff
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*Good moral
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*Got the serious/goofy mix just right for the genere
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*Incredibly quotable
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*Dynamic archetypical characters
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*Clear plot, convoluted into an interesting story
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Bad stuff
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*Permissive/lying/stupid father figure
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*Poorly resolved moral tone?
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=Books=
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==Dragon Spear==
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Good stuff
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*uneducated main charcter (makes exposition easy)
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*Main character isn't a jerk, but also isn't a manly-woman
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Bad stuff
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*Friendly dragons.
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*Farmer dragons.
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*Generally good dragons.  Better than most people even... seriously
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*elementery style and vocabulary
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*Too much repitition

Revision as of 04:15, 18 October 2009

We seem to be really good at finding things we dislike in many different stories and situations so I figured we could compile them into a list so we ourselves don't make the same mistakes... or at least have something we can beat ourselves with afterwords.

Movies

9

Good stuff

  • set some ideas up about teamwork
  • complete setting
  • simple story

Bad stuff

  • half constructed metaphors
  • schizophrenic themes
  • So surreal one couldn't connect
  • screaming bad guys
  • consistent repetitive omnipresent human failure
  • plot holes


Tale of desparouxque

Good stuff

  • metaphors seemed to be really awesome and complete

Bad stuff

  • seemed to drop metaphors and themes in mid stride

Emporers New Groove

Good stuff

  • Good moral
  • Got the serious/goofy mix just right for the genere
  • Incredibly quotable
  • Dynamic archetypical characters
  • Clear plot, convoluted into an interesting story

Bad stuff

  • Permissive/lying/stupid father figure
  • Poorly resolved moral tone?

Books

Dragon Spear

Good stuff

  • uneducated main charcter (makes exposition easy)
  • Main character isn't a jerk, but also isn't a manly-woman

Bad stuff

  • Friendly dragons.
  • Farmer dragons.
  • Generally good dragons. Better than most people even... seriously
  • elementery style and vocabulary
  • Too much repitition