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| + | Good stuff | ||
| + | *set some ideas up about teamwork | ||
| + | *complete setting | ||
| + | *simple story | ||
Bad stuff | Bad stuff | ||
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*So surreal one couldn't connect | *So surreal one couldn't connect | ||
*screaming bad guys | *screaming bad guys | ||
| − | *human failure | + | *consistent repetitive omnipresent human failure |
*plot holes | *plot holes | ||
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| + | ==Tale of desparouxque== | ||
Good stuff | Good stuff | ||
| − | * | + | *metaphors seemed to be really awesome and complete |
| − | * | + | *The "death" mouse and the pit. That whole setting. |
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| + | Bad stuff | ||
| + | *seemed to drop metaphors and themes in mid stride | ||
| + | *Near the end they jump from location to location; this seemed easy, but should have been very hard! (it was much harder earlier) | ||
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| + | ==Emporers New Groove== | ||
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| + | Good stuff | ||
| + | *Good moral | ||
| + | *Got the serious/goofy mix just right for the genere | ||
| + | *Incredibly quotable | ||
| + | *Dynamic archetypical characters | ||
| + | *Clear plot, convoluted into an interesting story | ||
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| + | Bad stuff | ||
| + | *Permissive/lying/stupid father figure | ||
| + | *Poorly resolved moral tone? | ||
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| + | ==Batman, Dark Knight== | ||
| + | |||
| + | Good stuff | ||
| + | *Believable and powerful villain (Joker) | ||
| + | *Awesomeness | ||
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| + | Bad stuff | ||
| + | *No "good" person will kill others | ||
| + | *Contrived choices, fallacy of false alternatives | ||
| + | *Godless grasping for a basis of right action | ||
| + | *Dumb idiot villains (Anyone but The Joker) | ||
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| + | ==Megamind== | ||
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| + | Good stuff | ||
| + | *Excellent dialog | ||
| + | *"Clean" in action and speech, while still presenting real struggles | ||
| + | *Fantastic yet believable characters | ||
| + | |||
| + | Bad stuff | ||
| + | *Continuing confusion over what "evil" really means | ||
| + | *Power of Eros to create Agape ex-nihilo | ||
| + | *Mocking overtones | ||
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| + | =Books= | ||
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| + | ==Dragon Spear== | ||
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| + | Good stuff | ||
| + | *uneducated main charcter (makes exposition easy) | ||
| + | *Main character isn't a jerk, but also isn't a manly-woman | ||
| + | |||
| + | Bad stuff | ||
| + | *Friendly dragons. | ||
| + | *Farmer dragons. | ||
| + | *Generally good dragons. Better than most people even... seriously | ||
| + | *elementery style and vocabulary | ||
| + | *Too much repitition | ||
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| + | ==The Ballad of the White Horse== | ||
| + | |||
| + | Good stuff | ||
| + | *Believable "good guys" and "bad guys" who have real thoughts and self-deceits. | ||
| + | *Profound insight into the timeless struggle of right behavior. | ||
| + | *This: | ||
| + | **For our God hath blessed creation, | ||
| + | **Calling it good. I know | ||
| + | **What spirit with whom you blindly band | ||
| + | **Hath blessed destruction with his hand; | ||
| + | **Yet by God's death the stars shall stand | ||
| + | **And the small apples grow. | ||
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| + | Bad stuff | ||
| + | *Usually too high-minded to grip the heart | ||
| + | *difficult to follow except with exceptional concentration. | ||
Latest revision as of 23:06, 19 April 2011
We seem to be really good at finding things we dislike in many different stories and situations so I figured we could compile them into a list so we ourselves don't make the same mistakes... or at least have something we can beat ourselves with afterwords.
Contents
Movies
9
Good stuff
- set some ideas up about teamwork
- complete setting
- simple story
Bad stuff
- half constructed metaphors
- schizophrenic themes
- So surreal one couldn't connect
- screaming bad guys
- consistent repetitive omnipresent human failure
- plot holes
Tale of desparouxque
Good stuff
- metaphors seemed to be really awesome and complete
- The "death" mouse and the pit. That whole setting.
Bad stuff
- seemed to drop metaphors and themes in mid stride
- Near the end they jump from location to location; this seemed easy, but should have been very hard! (it was much harder earlier)
Emporers New Groove
Good stuff
- Good moral
- Got the serious/goofy mix just right for the genere
- Incredibly quotable
- Dynamic archetypical characters
- Clear plot, convoluted into an interesting story
Bad stuff
- Permissive/lying/stupid father figure
- Poorly resolved moral tone?
Batman, Dark Knight
Good stuff
- Believable and powerful villain (Joker)
- Awesomeness
Bad stuff
- No "good" person will kill others
- Contrived choices, fallacy of false alternatives
- Godless grasping for a basis of right action
- Dumb idiot villains (Anyone but The Joker)
Megamind
Good stuff
- Excellent dialog
- "Clean" in action and speech, while still presenting real struggles
- Fantastic yet believable characters
Bad stuff
- Continuing confusion over what "evil" really means
- Power of Eros to create Agape ex-nihilo
- Mocking overtones
Books
Dragon Spear
Good stuff
- uneducated main charcter (makes exposition easy)
- Main character isn't a jerk, but also isn't a manly-woman
Bad stuff
- Friendly dragons.
- Farmer dragons.
- Generally good dragons. Better than most people even... seriously
- elementery style and vocabulary
- Too much repitition
The Ballad of the White Horse
Good stuff
- Believable "good guys" and "bad guys" who have real thoughts and self-deceits.
- Profound insight into the timeless struggle of right behavior.
- This:
- For our God hath blessed creation,
- Calling it good. I know
- What spirit with whom you blindly band
- Hath blessed destruction with his hand;
- Yet by God's death the stars shall stand
- And the small apples grow.
Bad stuff
- Usually too high-minded to grip the heart
- difficult to follow except with exceptional concentration.
