Difference between revisions of "House of Hozz:Community Portal"

Latest revision as of 07:33, 28 April 2010

The overall story arc really needs to be expanded/solidified.

The University needs some more details. Maybe some sketches.

Escape backstory could always be fleshed out more. This plays heavily into the character and history of Durand and Llieah.

Use the information in Category:HOZZ_brothers to flesh out the brothers themselves.

Cosmos has a few questions that need answers.

Llieah has a major backstory element added, also affects The House and Durand. Review, comment, and revise?

Shaquell, the dragon could use fleshing out. Also, he needs a much better name.

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-[[TwinWorld]] needs a little more overhaul.  Mostly completed though.
+[[Main_Plot_Arc| The overall story arc]] really needs to be expanded/solidified.
 [[The University]] needs some more details. Maybe some sketches.
-[[Falling Droplet]] could use some critique/analysis
 [[Escape]] backstory could always be fleshed out more.  This plays heavily into the character and history of [[Durand]] and [[Llieah]].
 Use the information in [[:Category:HOZZ_brothers]] to flesh out the brothers themselves.
-[[Initial explorations]] needs to be taken in a definate direction, and fleshed out some more.
 [[Cosmos]] has a few questions that need answers.
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 [[Llieah]] has a major backstory element added, also affects [[The House]] and [[Durand]].  Review, comment, and revise?
-[[Shaquell]], the [[dragon]] could use fleshing out.  Also, a better name.
+[[Shaquell]], the [[dragon]] could use fleshing out.  Also, he needs a much better name.