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Revision as of 03:23, 17 October 2009
We seem to be really good at finding things we dislike in many different stories and situations so I figured we could compile them into a list so we ourselves don't make the same mistakes... or at least have something we can beat ourselves with afterwords.
Movies
9
Good stuff
- set some ideas up about teamwork
- complete setting
- simple story
Bad stuff
- half constructed metaphors
- schizophrenic themes
- So surreal one couldn't connect
- screaming bad guys
- human failure
- plot holes
Tale of desparouxque
Good stuff
- metaphors seemed to be really awesome and complete
Bad stuff
- seemed to drop metaphors and themes in mid stride
