Difference between revisions of "Intro To First Degree Burns"
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What I'm trying to avoid, is the direct implication that Oswald lighting his torch causes the guy in the background to catch fire. The current setup seems to imply this. [[User:Ziggy|Ziggy]] 18:29, 12 February 2009 (UTC) | What I'm trying to avoid, is the direct implication that Oswald lighting his torch causes the guy in the background to catch fire. The current setup seems to imply this. [[User:Ziggy|Ziggy]] 18:29, 12 February 2009 (UTC) | ||
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Revision as of 00:10, 13 February 2009
| Where | The University |
| When | unkown |
| Who | Oswald |
| Summary | Panel 1: Professor "Alright everyone, now that we're through the two weeks of welding safety, you should all know how to not blow yourselves up... immediately. So with that we're going to split you into two groups for the first 6 weeks, arc welders and gas welders. Lets go!"
Panel 2: Oswald is standing with his welding gear on, holding a torch and a striker. Guy in the background is welding Panel 3: Panel 3 is three subsets where he you see hands adjusting the necessary valves and Oswald clicking the striker. Panel 4: Oswald holds a torch. It streams out fire to eliminate his gleeful, enchanted, and scheming face. Because of the contrasted black background, you can't see anything behind him. Panel 5: Oswald's position doesn't change. But he face drops to worry, as the guy in the back yells "AAAAAAUUGGHHH! I'M ON FIRE!" At this point the pants of the guy in the background are now aflame around the bottom. |
We should build it so that way panel 2 and 3 are small. And preferably panel 4 and 5 have really different moods. This might be a good one to work on. Given everything that we'd have to do to get the lighting and expressions right. Oswald 01:31, 5 February 2009 (UTC)
What I'm trying to avoid, is the direct implication that Oswald lighting his torch causes the guy in the background to catch fire. The current setup seems to imply this. Ziggy 18:29, 12 February 2009 (UTC)
Concept sketches:
